just you and I
dancing under
a bare bulb.
we had no radio,
so I sang to you
as we swayed
to the rhythm
of my voice
the lack
of furniture made
for a perfect
dance space.
clutter
was never
our thing.
your nose
brushed against
my neck and
you smiled
you never
smile anymore.
my song hummed
against your eardrum
your breath
tickled my senses
now
I sing
the same song
under the same bulb,
but
my dance
is with this
bottle.
you’re out
dancing, too,
with someone
who cannot sing
nearly
as well
as I can.
April 16th, 2010 at 9:16 am
fun poem!
April 16th, 2010 at 9:17 am
you are the perfect poet award,
Happy Friday!
April 16th, 2010 at 2:23 pm
dang…you painted the perfect moment in the first part and then smash it beautifully in the second half. tight.
April 16th, 2010 at 4:07 pm
Thank you very much, sir 🙂
April 21st, 2010 at 1:54 pm
wonderfully put..